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shinigami
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Sun Mar 06, 2011 11:00 am | |
| - FunThingsAreFun wrote:
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After a few months of being released, Cosmic Break had slowly declined. Only a few users were still playing. Lily had never before noticed 'Channel 6', and curiosity got the best of her. Powerful energy engulfed her as she was teleported to the central area. She looked around and noticed just how empty it was, it appeared that she was completely alone. Not a single mech could be found, even the non-hero bots that usually occupied the area were nowhere to be found.
"Hello?"
Nothing. She suddenly felt uneasy and alone, she walked around in search of anything, or anyone. After a few minutes had passed, she began to feel scared. She sat down by the empty mission counter and checked her map, her eyes widened and she felt a shiver down her neck. A lone air unit showed up on her map, it was a distance away from her yet it slowly moved closer and closer. She started looking in the direction and saw a lone figure, she felt tense and afraid.
"Who are you?! D-Don't come any closer!"
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"Stay away!"
She felt as if this was some sort of nightmare, she summoned the strength to leap over the mission counter. now huddled in fear, Lily was too afraid to peak over the counter.
After what seemed like an eternity, Lily wiped the tears from here eyes and checked her map. The air unit was still there. She slowly looked over the counter, and was relieved to see a familiar face.
"...C-Crim?"
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"Is that you?"
"I'm sorry... I didn't mean to scare you..."
Lily sniffled and slowly stood up, wiping her face.
"That wasn't very nice..."
She noticed Crim had been crying as well.
"I... I was afraid I was the only one here..."
Lily managed a smile.
"D-Dummy... that's my line!"
Seemingly out of nowhere, GM_Tempura burst from the ground. Rocks and debris littered the ground and the once quiet channel now echoes with the screams of Lily and Crim as they hugged each other in fear.
BUY RT! BUY RT! BUY RT!
And then they all died, and Cosmic Break exploded, and then the universe imploded.
Bad End
NNooooo!CB cant die yet,my money will be even moar wasted D: | |
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ironpen27
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Sun Mar 06, 2011 12:06 pm | |
| - necrio wrote:
- ironpen27 wrote:
- necrio wrote:
- OKIES, DIE DIE DIE
- Cannonballer lol:
The war with Chaos...
It has been a long time since it started...
The end is yet in sight...
The memories of the first assault to the Cosmic Ark is still fresh in my core.
The sounds of alarms roaring in the air as the shields of the Ark shattered into pieces under Chaos' mighty sword.
The barriers disappeared, life support systems failing. The biological beings were evacuated as us robots held the forces of Chaos to buy them time.
I was there.
The mighty A.Sura, known as the Thousand Armed God. I fought alongside the three legendary Arks, Bladine, Dostrex, and Wizdom.
Along with the other bots we fought the forces of Chaos back.
We pushed them deep into the Dark Space Region.
But it was a trap.
Chaos has prepared an ambush. An army a hundred times the size of ours.
Our Aquilas got shot down, our Destructors and Contradicts impaled.
Even the mighty Daedalion was getting worn out, his frame full of dents and holes.
But hope was not lost.
Ten thousand robots of Chaos, one thousand arms of mine.
For a hundred grueling hours I fought the endless wave of darkness.
And yet I was still standing.
It was apparent that Chaos was not pleased with the outcome.
Engulfed in a dark flame, he appeared before me. His mighty sword lifted upon me.
My arms locked in combat with his minions, my shields already failing.
For a moment, I knew it was the end.
As his gigantic sword impaled me through my chest, I could feel my energy core failing.
In a desperate attempt, I directed all my remaining arms at him, holding him in place.
And it was then, Bladine finally sliced through the darkness with his sword.
Behind him Dostrex and Wizdom firing towards Chaos.
And everything faded...
It was not until recently was I found.
Floating inactive in the empty Dark Space Region.
I was brought back to the Ark, my core refitted in a new body.
It is not a powerful frame.
But to protect others from suffering my fate, I shall fight once more.
I, Cannon Baller, vow to protect the Cosmic Ark forever more.
Epic....just epic  Thankies  and oh i forgot.... Cannon baller WAS MANLY...EVEN NAO! LOL! i think it eould be good if you make your own description of cannon's past form...i mean...who is he? just for fun | |
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necrio
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Sun Mar 06, 2011 12:33 pm | |
| - ironpen27 wrote:
and oh i forgot.... Cannon baller WAS MANLY...EVEN NAO! LOL!
i think it eould be good if you make your own description of cannon's past form...i mean...who is he?
just for fun You asked for it. Due to my lack of 1337 art skillz, here's a wall of text describing cannonballer's past form : - Spoiler:
A.Sura
Type : ART (lol he can melee)
Size : L (easily LL if there's such a size class)
Statistics :
STR = 30
TEC = 40
WLK = 35
FLY = 20
TGH = 40
Wonder Bit : Thousand Arms <<< the thousand arms in the backstory
Basically, 996 wonderbits at once, each shaped like floating hands orbiting A.Sura. The other 4 arms are his. Half of the bits come with weapons of differing types, the other half comes empty handed and is capable of grabbing and punching enemies. The wonder bit is on permanent activation once activated until they're destroyed. The bits can only be activated once via A.Sura's core weapon.
Parts :
A.Sura HD >> somewhat similar to Amateus', though also kinda different as well. Well, let's just say it's Amateus' HD's basic shape, with both being representations of japanese mythology (asura = demon), just with less wing attributes of Amateus and a mostly darker and edgier design since he is supposed to represent demons. Also with two horns.
A.Sura BD >> a gigantic BD, around 1.5 times taller than Kosmo Kaiser. Has shields on the front part. Looks alike to the Sturbanger frame. Has two weapons on it, a main weapon in the form of a pair of HellRaiser missles (yes I'm just making stuff up here if you haven't noticed), which are basially napalm launchers capable of inflicting burn. The other weapon is the sub that activates his thousand arm bit.
A.Sura AMJs x2 >> DUH, OBVIOUS PART IS OBVIOUS
A.Sura AMs x4 >> Looks alike to Izuna's / haku's arm, only with the yellow wing thingy replaced with a shape similar to the A. Sura AMJ. Has a Slash subweapon where the AMJ-like things are used as blades that emit shockwaves. Can equip weapons.
A.Sura BS >> Somewhat similar to Sturbanger's BD launcher, only it is shaped more like a bat's wing with an energy field forming the wing membranes while in flight. Also launches HellRaiser napalms.
A.Sura LG >> Similar to Bugsycait's. Nothing much to say here.
If you haven't noticed yet, this is particularly gamebreaking. Mostly since we're dealing with a bot that has near-Ark levels of power. Besides, I'm only making things up as I go.
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ironpen27
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Sun Mar 06, 2011 12:46 pm | |
| - necrio wrote:
- ironpen27 wrote:
and oh i forgot.... Cannon baller WAS MANLY...EVEN NAO! LOL!
i think it eould be good if you make your own description of cannon's past form...i mean...who is he?
just for fun
You asked for it.
Due to my lack of 1337 art skillz, here's a wall of text describing cannonballer's past form :
- Spoiler:
A.Sura
Type : ART (lol he can melee)
Size : L (easily LL if there's such a size class)
Statistics :
STR = 30
TEC = 40
WLK = 35
FLY = 20
TGH = 40
Wonder Bit : Thousand Arms <<< the thousand arms in the backstory
Basically, 996 wonderbits at once, each shaped like floating hands orbiting A.Sura. The other 4 arms are his. Half of the bits come with weapons of differing types, the other half comes empty handed and is capable of grabbing and punching enemies. The wonder bit is on permanent activation once activated until they're destroyed. The bits can only be activated once via A.Sura's core weapon.
Parts :
A.Sura HD >> somewhat similar to Amateus', though also kinda different as well. Well, let's just say it's Amateus' HD's basic shape, with both being representations of japanese mythology (asura = demon), just with less wing attributes of Amateus and a mostly darker and edgier design since he is supposed to represent demons. Also with two horns.
A.Sura BD >> a gigantic BD, around 1.5 times taller than Kosmo Kaiser. Has shields on the front part. Looks alike to the Sturbanger frame. Has two weapons on it, a main weapon in the form of a pair of HellRaiser missles (yes I'm just making stuff up here if you haven't noticed), which are basially napalm launchers capable of inflicting burn. The other weapon is the sub that activates his thousand arm bit.
A.Sura AMJs x2 >> DUH, OBVIOUS PART IS OBVIOUS
A.Sura AMs x4 >> Looks alike to Izuna's / haku's arm, only with the yellow wing thingy replaced with a shape similar to the A. Sura AMJ. Has a Slash subweapon where the AMJ-like things are used as blades that emit shockwaves. Can equip weapons.
A.Sura BS >> Somewhat similar to Sturbanger's BD launcher, only it is shaped more like a bat's wing with an energy field forming the wing membranes while in flight. Also launches HellRaiser napalms.
A.Sura LG >> Similar to Bugsycait's. Nothing much to say here.
If you haven't noticed yet, this is particularly gamebreaking. Mostly since we're dealing with a bot that has near-Ark levels of power. Besides, I'm only making things up as I go.
at first iwas... ?? Asura? I thought Asura was the other bot anyway, from what youve described him, he's like an ARK level bot...more even higher than the three lol reading your backstory gives me these "film like" ideas in my head...if only i had the skills in animation or in comic/manga making ill definitely make one based on you backstory man beacause of this backstory thread....i wanna make my own nao jeez! | |
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Nisa
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Mon Mar 07, 2011 3:18 am | |
| There IS a LL sized fyi.
and Asura is not gamebreaking enuff D:
he needs hp around the level's of berzelius
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Mon Mar 07, 2011 5:00 am | |
| - Nisa wrote:
- There IS a LL sized fyi.
and Asura is not gamebreaking enuff D:
he needs hp around the level's of berzelius
You mean it has to be... - Spoiler:
...over 9000?!?!?!? THAT CAN'T BE RIGHT?! CAN IT?!!?
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necrio
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Mon Mar 07, 2011 7:28 am | |
| - LXE wrote:
- necrio wrote:
- I always fail at making long essays / stories / whatever, one of the few reasons I suck at forum roleplaying
Then why'd you start that roleplaying thread?  because, while I suck at it, I like it. Therefore I am your boytitan of roleplaying, frankly speaking. | |
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Nisa
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Mon Mar 07, 2011 10:48 am | |
| FFFFFF- WE JUST GOT NECRIO'D | |
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necrio
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Mon Mar 07, 2011 11:41 am | |
| - Nisa wrote:
- FFFFFF- WE JUST GOT NECRO'D
Oh my god, tissue necrosis? That's bad, we need a doctor. | |
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Wolf Hikari
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Mon Mar 07, 2011 12:57 pm | |
| True Story of Izuna Kamui Nagi- FS:
Izuna was flying to take a fresh air and then her booster's energy insufficient. She fall to the ground and die.
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ironpen27
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Mon Mar 07, 2011 6:36 pm | |
| - Wolf Hikari wrote:
True Story of Izuna Kamui Nagi
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Izuna was flying to take a fresh air and then her booster's energy insufficient. She fall to the ground and die.
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necrio
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Tue Mar 08, 2011 5:23 am | |
| I think I can make one for Grienaut. He's got interesting flavor text. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Tue Mar 08, 2011 6:28 am | |
| - necrio wrote:
- I think I can make one for Grienaut. He's got interesting flavor text.
Hey, Necrio! Slow down there buddy, let somebody have a go. It's not fair and above all, not cool to take everything for yourself! - Reason why:
I AM UR SUB LEADER LISTEN TO MAH ORDERS OR ALL UR RT ARE BELONG TO ME, SOLDIER!!!
That sounds a bit over-zealous
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Nisa
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Tue Mar 08, 2011 6:50 am | |
| Story of ririrein.
One dey,little blue riding hood was walking in the park
she fell in a hole and become LRE.
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necrio
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Tue Mar 08, 2011 6:55 am | |
| - LXE wrote:
- necrio wrote:
- I think I can make one for Grienaut. He's got interesting flavor text.
Hey, Necrio! Slow down there buddy, let somebody have a go. It's not fair and above all, not cool to take everything for yourself!
- Reason why:
I AM UR SUB LEADER LISTEN TO MAH ORDERS OR ALL UR RT ARE BELONG TO ME, SOLDIER!!!
That sounds a bit over-zealous
I was a sub leader D: | |
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Tue Mar 08, 2011 7:05 am | |
| - necrio wrote:
- LXE wrote:
- necrio wrote:
- I think I can make one for Grienaut. He's got interesting flavor text.
Hey, Necrio! Slow down there buddy, let somebody have a go. It's not fair and above all, not cool to take everything for yourself!
- Reason why:
I AM UR SUB LEADER LISTEN TO MAH ORDERS OR ALL UR RT ARE BELONG TO ME, SOLDIER!!!
That sounds a bit over-zealous
I was a sub leader D: I don't see no star on your name. |
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necrio
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Tue Mar 08, 2011 8:41 am | |
| - LXE wrote:
- necrio wrote:
- LXE wrote:
Hey, Necrio! Slow down there buddy, let somebody have a go. It's not fair and above all, not cool to take everything for yourself!
- Reason why:
I AM UR SUB LEADER LISTEN TO MAH ORDERS OR ALL UR RT ARE BELONG TO ME, SOLDIER!!!
That sounds a bit over-zealous
I was a sub leader D: I don't see no star on your name. no longer am, dummy. | |
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Nisa
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Tue Mar 08, 2011 8:50 am | |
| - necrio wrote:
- LXE wrote:
- necrio wrote:
I was a sub leader D: I don't see no star on your name. no longer am, dummy. don't call her dumb D:(senile is a better word) she's obviously at least older than the arks,just look at all that grey hair! | |
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necrio
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Tue Mar 08, 2011 8:52 am | |
| - Nisa wrote:
- necrio wrote:
- LXE wrote:
I don't see no star on your name. no longer am, dummy.
don't call her dumb D:(senile is a better word)
she's obviously at least older than the arks,just look at all that grey hair! according to her fanfiction it was due to excessive stress | |
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reiya
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Tue Mar 08, 2011 9:01 am | |
| Izuna Kamui Nagi backstory done. IT'S A DAMN LONG READ.
link is here for the lazy.
http://www.cosmicbreakfanforum.com/t3304p15-back-story-thread-release-your-imagination#55269 | |
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Nisa
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Tue Mar 08, 2011 10:04 am | |
| - reiya wrote:
- Izuna Kamui Nagi backstory done. IT'S A DAMN LONG READ.
link is here for the lazy.
http://www.cosmicbreakfanforum.com/t3304p15-back-story-thread-release-your-imagination#55269 OwO will type a longer comment once i snap outta lazy moudo | |
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Wolf Hikari
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Tue Mar 08, 2011 10:49 am | |
| - reiya wrote:
- Izuna Kamui Nagi backstory done. IT'S A DAMN LONG READ.
link is here for the lazy.
http://www.cosmicbreakfanforum.com/t3304p15-back-story-thread-release-your-imagination#55269 You said there were no fight, but I can see she fights with DemonFox Haku. And yet.. You make her like Arcuied. Nice and good story anyway, it's really good to read since I can imagine how she struggle the pain and her emotions, and scene was clearly out. I almost thought I read a manga actually... | |
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reiya
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Tue Mar 08, 2011 10:54 am | |
| thanks wolf. lol. always wanted to do manga/novel/books so i figured might as well just do it. lol.
as for the Arcueid part.. was unintentional. lol i mean since her flavour texts says that she has Haku sealed in her body, i'd try to bend around there.
I like reading your story too. ZSG for the win~ ^^ | |
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Wolf Hikari
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| | Subject: Re: Story Time Thread - Release your imagination Tue Mar 08, 2011 10:57 am | |
| - reiya wrote:
- thanks wolf. lol. always wanted to do manga/novel/books so i figured might as well just do it. lol.
as for the Arcueid part.. was unintentional. lol i mean since her flavour texts says that she has Haku sealed in her body, i'd try to bend around there.
I like reading your story too. ZSG for the win~ ^^ Welcome, and thank you for reading ZSG too. | |
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