Need help with japanese sentences

I'm doing a surprise project that involves a few japanese sentences.

But the translations i've found seem rather suspicious, so i wanted to ask if anyone could help me with corrections or another kind of help.

Here's the phrases and following translations:



Victory will be ours. - Shouri ha watashi tachi ga ari masu.

Intruder alert! - Shinnyuu sha keikoku!

You wish the crystal's power? - Anata ha , kesshou no pawā tai desu ka?

Fool... - Baka ...

Then I will show it to you. - Sore ha watashi ga anata ni hyouji sa re masu.

Time is the fire in which you burn! - Jikan ha , hi o moyashi ta no desu !

Enough! - Takusan!

Taste true despair! - Ma aji zetsubou!

Your hope betrays you... - Anata no kitai o uragiru...

Impossible! Impo... - Deki nai! Deki...


Could anyone help me, please?

Typical villainspeech ._.

Did you use google translate? You're spewing inappropriate terms all over the place.

Hmm, knew it was suspicious... and sorry if any of them was too inappropriate.

Right, using Google translate it'll go like this:


Victory will be ours. - Shouri ha wareware no mono ni nari masu.

Intruder Alert! - shinnyuu sha keihou! (basically the same)

You wish the crystal's power? - Anata ha suishou no chikara o nozomu?

Fool... - Baka ... (this one i knew already)

Then I will show it to you. - Sonogo , watashi ha anata ni sore ga hyouji sa re masu.

Time is the fire in which you burn! - Jikan ha anata ga moyasu reru kasai desu!

Enough! - Juubun ni!

Taste true despair! - Shin no zetsubou o ajiwau!

Your hope betrays you... - Anata no kibou ha anata o uragit te...

Impossible! Impo... - Fukanou! Fuka...


Are these terms better then?




...So, by noboy posting means they hit the mark? Or are there any that are still inconsistent?

1) why you double post?
2) Yes, they're just as far off.

He was probably just bumping it so it wouldn't be considered Forever Lost.

Translating sites tend to be really horribad. Google is really awful.

I have little to no knowledge of Japanese (aside from specific terms like the names of animals and colors and how to count to three) so I'm not much help.

Do you have a Japanese-to-English dictionary lying around? If not, your best bet would probably be to stalk Rei or Ret or Misa (or Mew? He knows Japanese iirc) until they help you.

I have a Jap-to-Eng dictionary somewhere, but I don't know which box it's in. ;__; And it wouldn't be much help with grammar anyway.

http://www.justdubsforums.com/showthread.php?t=86965 <- This was created on one of my other forum boards a little while ago. It should help you on basic verbs and conjunctions in the Japanese Language. If you have any specific questions, I can always contact the person who made this thread myself :3

I could translate it into typical villain speech, but I... well, you know, don't want to because you can watch any super cliche shit and find the same lines.

just put it on fb imma tag some jap people i know, one of them watches anime in RAW so she must know
how the fu---- I WAS ON INBOX A SECOND AGO, WHAT IS THIS BLACK MAGIC D:<

Thanks for the help everyone ^^

Edit: I'll have to tell the whole story so it won't raise confusions: i was thinking of making a guide with a kill video, but the mission felt a bit empty, so i was thinking of voicing the final boss on a few parts to spice it a bit.

It's true that the mission will fade this Thursday, but i wa thinking of adding something in the archives for later review once it would go live again.

Quote :

just put it on fb

And what did FB standed for, btw?

Gerrion wrote:

Thanks for the help everyone ^^

Edit: I'll have to tell the whole story so it won't raise confusions: i was thinking of making a guide with a kill video, but the mission felt a bit empty, so i was thinking of voicing the final boss on a few parts to spice it a bit.

It's true that the mission will fade this Thursday, but i wa thinking of adding something in the archives for later review once it would go live again.

Quote :

just put it on fb

And what did FB standed for, btw?

FB is facebook

And for the LOVE of GOD don't voice the boss.

You can add puns though. Like, don't be bahead'd

hurrhurrhurr.

https://youtu.be/a9eNQZbjpJk?t=2m42s

What's what you want to translate anyway?

Hyoka wrote:

Quote :

just put it on fb

And what did FB standed for, btw?

FB is Flying Beavers, don't listen to Hyoka s(=w=)z
Nah it means FB, seems i have more weeaboo's than japanese friends on it lol