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tehprognoob
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PostSubject: Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong   Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong EmptyThu Feb 23, 2012 1:21 am

Screwing around with a fanfic, lol.

Going to re-format tomorrow

Prologue

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Chapter 1:
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Chapter 2:

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PostSubject: Re: Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong   Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong EmptyThu Feb 23, 2012 1:42 am

#em3

I like this, especially the C.S. parts =P
The Arks have fallen into their ruinous despair.
Looking forward to their first course of action.
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PostSubject: Re: Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong   Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong EmptyThu Feb 23, 2012 1:44 am

I had to stop reading at chapter 2 because I burst out laughing so hard at the phrase "walked abreast".
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PostSubject: Re: Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong   Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong EmptyThu Feb 23, 2012 4:35 am

Oh wow, oh wow DDD: <33;; What a different view of perspective for the current situation of the game! XD I think I probably know what would happen next... *STARES AT RESHA*

But I'm curious about this:
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“Then there’s C.S.’s favorites,” it said. “Half-robots so powerful, they can clear swarms of Chaos robots with one shot.
According to canon, C.S-chan's creations were... Aquilia Girl, Mighty Byne Girl, Toybox Girl and if it counted, the Three Guardians in human form. D: Unless CS has a way to duplicate all of them, I don't know if them alone can handle an entire army D< (Unless... they're taking drugs or something...)

I wonder what's the three guardians doing in that situation. >_<

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living quarters were twenty Root a bed per night.
That room must be made of gold if it's more expensive than a chibi. DDD<

OVERALL, Nice work! 8D Hope to see more soon!... if you're doing more.
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PostSubject: Re: Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong   Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong EmptyThu Feb 23, 2012 6:17 am

Chibis were 80-100 rt in EN/JP

10 or so in TW
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PostSubject: Re: Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong   Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong EmptyThu Feb 23, 2012 11:59 pm

Updated with better formatting

Lines are now better separated
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PostSubject: Re: Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong   Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong EmptySat Mar 10, 2012 12:58 am

Updating

"Chapter III: Ivis":
 
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PostSubject: Re: Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong   Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong EmptySat Jun 30, 2012 10:49 am

someone help make a manga out of these~!

Great works here tech!
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PostSubject: Re: Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong   Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong EmptySat Jun 30, 2012 11:51 am

Yeah, good work teh! #em1

I'm looking for chapter VI #em3

And these have to become great manga #em2
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PostSubject: Re: Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong   Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong EmptySat Jun 30, 2012 12:01 pm

Nice Cynister! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong   Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong EmptySat Jun 30, 2012 10:27 pm

This gives me a little faith in fanfictions. Just a little.
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PostSubject: Re: Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong   Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong EmptySat Mar 18, 2017 10:15 pm

I found a fossil :3c
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PostSubject: Re: Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong   Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong EmptySat Mar 18, 2017 10:55 pm

HOLY CRAP THIS A REALLY GOOD FANLORE GOSH. can I make a continuation of this and place it on this thread?
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PostSubject: Re: Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong   Initum Fanfiction: Where we Belong EmptySun Mar 19, 2017 3:07 am

oh fook, it's by chapters, nvm, I'll just make something else but kinda using this like it was canon
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