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PostSubject: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyTue Jul 17, 2012 3:11 pm

Backround info* I always did like gwyian he seems cool and seeing im a anime fan and talented artist(Postive thinker Very Happy) I thought i draw a more knightly approach Hope you like them drunken


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Hope you like my pics i like to draw im into lots of anime and i can gladly take request for your favorite moe or mecha . Deal with it
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyTue Jul 17, 2012 4:19 pm

its to positive for me ._.
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyTue Jul 17, 2012 4:47 pm

>looks at drawing
>looks at member's age

*scratch head*
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyTue Jul 17, 2012 5:04 pm

No insult intended: but wher is Gwyain? confused

rev.Elske wrote:
>looks at drawing
>looks at member's age

*scratch head*
If you saw one of my drawings, you wouldn't be suprised at all ö.ö
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyTue Jul 17, 2012 5:10 pm

Well actually im 16 i very shy about my age blah blah and @Zwiebel Force "thought i draw a more knightly approach " Well any there just on paper i was gonna work on them later in the week on my computer but seeing how no one likes them i guess i should t waste my time.
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyTue Jul 17, 2012 6:06 pm

You shouldn't lie about your age #em0

I never pay attention to the date of posts, so I assumed this was one of these topics that get updated every now and then and searchd for Gwayain - Anyways, I was glad if I could draw like you. Thanks to some brain damage caused by epileptic attacks, when I was a child, even my handdrawing is horrible (in fact my 8 year old nephew has a better handwriting than me ;A;). I remember that fat chick in my class, she started drawing at about your age to and her first drawings looked pretty similiar, later she shocked everyone with her irritatingly good yaoi pictures x3c

Tl;dr: you should go on drawing. I'd advise you not to draw yaoi in school though '-'
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyTue Jul 17, 2012 11:29 pm

God his body is tiny for a proper knight
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyThu Jul 19, 2012 7:53 pm

you are definitely THAT guy.

that guy who can draw heads ok enough but once you have to do anything else
your hand shrivels up and you can't properly draw anymore.

just keep trying and work on learning the human anatomy!
i like knight armor stuff like this.

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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyMon Jul 23, 2012 10:02 pm

Well in my defense i kinda deserve the negative reviews i should of explained that those pics are not my usual drawing style it was just me trying to do something new sure i failed but at the end of the day I took a leap and i fail at-least now i can get up and try to make it work and make it look good for the world (Or for u people who cant draw worth sh*t.. monkey ). But with me being a attention whore i thought i give you a preview of my style ^^


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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyTue Jul 24, 2012 3:40 am

Practice more, everyday.
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyThu Jul 26, 2012 11:44 pm

Nice drawing! Last one's pretty cool! #em3
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyFri Aug 03, 2012 7:08 pm

Awesome! If they release a future bot that's one of C.S. Chan's experiments on Gywain, they should totally make it look like this!
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyFri Aug 03, 2012 8:37 pm

with a head bigger than it's body

it's funnier than moes with tits larger than their heads
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyFri Aug 03, 2012 8:42 pm

galaxina wrote:
Awesome! If they release a future bot that's one of C.S. Chan's experiments on Gywain, they should totally make it look like this!

Well if you really mean what you said,Then thank you not every day some will say something positive you on the internet
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On a other note Here the other examples ;3
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyFri Aug 03, 2012 9:12 pm

i will be blunt for your own good:

your drawings are nowhere near as good as the comment of galaxina implied they are.
neither the character design nor the actual picture itself are close to anything usable for a reference

btw the last few pictures got even more horrible than those before.

i might sound like an asshole to you, but at least im an honest one.

edit: i think there are 2 code geas characters? (im pretty sure the first one is one and the second one has green hair ... )

edit2: not having photoshop is not an excuse for a crappy picture at all, even with paint one can produce very good pictures.
on a side note: the missing shading of the first 2 isnt the main issue with the pictures at all
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyFri Aug 03, 2012 10:13 pm

@Aurum_Sol wrote:
i will be blunt for your own good:

your drawings are nowhere near as good as the comment of galaxina implied they are.
neither the character design nor the actual picture itself are close to anything usable for a reference

btw the last few pictures got even more horrible than those before.

i might sound like an asshole to you, but at least im an honest one.

edit: i think there are 2 code geas characters? (im pretty sure the first one is one and the second one has green hair ... )

edit2: not having photoshop is not an excuse for a crappy picture at all, even with paint one can produce very good pictures.
on a side note: the missing shading of the first 2 isnt the main issue with the pictures at all


Well i draw from my care free imagination "Go outside the box" Plus i only think your being so cruel to me because you wanted a big tit monster with long hair or what ever your fetish is

"anything usable for a reference" No idea what you mean by that.

But every one has there opinions and like some stuff and hate others on a other note i think its only fair that you post some pics of yours when you were 12 and under and just learning how to use computer after moving to a new country ,and yes i agree with you 100% i think the code grass characters i drew look bad but hey the great thing about being human is you learn from your mistakes and to me its a good step (Please keep in mind they are about 4 years old) and if i sound mad im not.


P.s :Well if your going to be ass-whole imma be a troll and fill this page with all my "Crappy pictures" I may not be a good troll but im a DAM good entertaining one? (how was that) alien
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyFri Aug 03, 2012 10:42 pm

No, he's not looking for a big tit monster with long hair.

He just wants some good quality art.
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyFri Aug 03, 2012 11:17 pm

@Hyoka wrote:
No, he's not looking for a big tit monster with long hair.

He just wants some good quality art.

Dam some one beat me to the trolling but on a serious note define "Good quality art"
Cause im really carious what lazy non-talented lazy Fucks like you to fap to

On a other note gonna keep my promise to Aurum_Sol

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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyFri Aug 03, 2012 11:42 pm

Just to note that you don't need another pair of [img] tags if you're copying it directly from the hosting site.
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptyFri Aug 03, 2012 11:47 pm

@blead wrote:
Just to note that you don't need another pair of [img] tags if you're copying it directly from the hosting site.

Thanks for the tip i was being to careless
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptySat Aug 04, 2012 12:01 am

@Lyndon wrote:
@Aurum_Sol wrote:
i will be blunt for your own good: ... snip
Well i draw from my care free imagination "Go outside the box" ... snip
When critiquing, one should point out what they don't like and what they do like. Along with that, possible suggestions the artist can use to improve the work. Missing any of those basically becomes a comment, something an artist can't really use.

Plus, fighting over art leaves a bad taste for both parties involved.

@ Lyndon
Judging by your style, your characters are pretty top heavy. It's basically similar to your avatar, so you should try mimicking the style in your avatar. Or, use a simple skeleton:
Something Like This as a Skeleton:
 
Most of your drawings lack stable anatomy. Get that under control and everything else should fall into place.

As for the hands and feet, just hold off until you feel like it's necessary. Or, use basic shapes, like so:
Howdy Thar!:
 

Better yet, find a style you really like, and copy its basic shape, then try mimicking it, then run wild with it. Drawing from just imagination alone is a long and difficult road, trust me.

Or you can take a standard approach and practice drawing from life, then simplifying the details.
~ Basic Advice
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptySat Aug 04, 2012 12:14 am

On the topic of good quality art, I'm saying more attention to proportions and details.

I'm not asking for something on
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(although if you can that would be fuckin' A+ )

But, for your current style, something more like this:

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Notice something?

Their body proportions.

Start with that; make their bodies bigger to match the head size.
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptySat Aug 04, 2012 2:24 am

Coclusion: Hyoka wants some shota! (rhymes are fun...)

You should really try to focus a little more on propotions. Maybe by drawing more "realistic"?
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptySat Aug 04, 2012 3:49 am

@Lyndon wrote:

Well i draw from my care free imagination "Go outside the box"

i have no issue with your imagination, i have issues with the broken way the pictures end up.
if you want to accuse me of something like that, you would need to mention of me being unable to see "abstract art" as art worth whatever is paid for it, for me thats just selling a 10y old child lvl art for thousands of dollars - that just not worth it. thats something you could have used that comment on
but your not drawing abstract, your drawing mutilated humans in a style that seems to be HEAVYLIE influenced by >a single anime character< (propably because you drew it so freakin often that your own way of drawing that one character now defines most (not all) of your pictures)
now that wouldnt be a big problem if i didnt have to write mutilated in that sentence.

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Plus i only think your being so cruel to me because you wanted a big tit monster with long hair or what ever your fetish is

if i wanted porn, id be looking for porn and not a random art thread in a random forum

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But every one has there opinions and like some stuff and hate others


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on a other note i think its only fair that you post some pics of yours when you were 12 and under

i doubt i have anything that old left, but i may as well take a look later on

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and just learning how to use computer

you allready fail on paper, dont blame it on using the computer

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after moving to a new country

which is related to your skills how?

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and yes i agree with you 100% i think the code grass characters i drew look bad but hey the great thing about being human is you learn from your mistakes and to me its a good step (Please keep in mind they are about 4 years old) and if i sound mad im not.

that requires you to be able to actually notice the mistakes, you allready lack that so you will either take ALOT time to notice the mistakes or never recognize them at all by yourself

senior grey propably also realised that much and took the other route and actually gave you a tip, and its one you should really follow - even if the tip is to learn very basic methods of drawing human anatomy (why? because its fucking useful even in advanced art)

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P.s :Well if your going to be ass-whole imma be a troll and fill this page with all my "Crappy pictures" I may not be a good troll but im a DAM good entertaining one? (how was that) :alien:

you are not entertaining, i posted in here simply because i was trying to be a nice person and not because i wanted to have fun.


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Maybe by drawing more "realistic"?


thats just switching art styles, not fixing issues - though it might be helpful in actually learning to draw before using the more distorted drawing style he currently uses
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PostSubject: Re: Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish   Lyndon and his Gywian Fetish EmptySat Aug 04, 2012 5:21 am

I meant he should try drawing more realistic in order to practise proportions. I wouldn't call the style he was probably trying to do "advanced", from what I've heard it's actually easier to draw than a "realistic" picture, but these anime styles usually use incorrect proportions making practising in these pretty much impossible.
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