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dmalone
Newbie
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Join date : 2012-05-24
Age : 27
Location : Indonesia
| | Subject: Black Gold Saw >.< Tue Jun 12, 2012 3:30 am | |
| First time editing a bot. Kuten Jikun Long M cosplayed as Black Gold Saw.  Feedback will be appreciated.  Download Reference:    Back:  Right  Front:  Using blade:  Left:  Without BS (Back motive):  EDIT: The dot under the breast fixed, but too lazy to change all the pic Download link changed to the fixed one
Last edited by dmalone on Mon Jun 18, 2012 6:28 am; edited 4 times in total | |
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Hyoka
Gaming Molcars
Posts : 4996
Join date : 2010-06-18
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Black Gold Saw >.< Tue Jun 12, 2012 3:42 am | |
| I never thought I'd be the one saying this
her chest looks wrong | |
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dmalone
Newbie
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Join date : 2012-05-24
Age : 27
Location : Indonesia
| | Subject: Re: Black Gold Saw >.< Tue Jun 12, 2012 4:15 am | |
| Fixed  | |
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milk
Ace Poster
Posts : 1918
Join date : 2010-06-09
| | Subject: Re: Black Gold Saw >.< Tue Jun 12, 2012 6:58 am | |
| i skimmed through it quickly and didn't notice that you said this wasn't an original edit but you were referencing something else.
so i went to go look at the real black gold saw.
wow, i can't believe they look almost alike.
though that's more thanks to this bot looking like her and you hardly had to do anything.
that sounds a bit harsh...but don't take it like that!
you still did some very nice work for it to FULLY look like her, know what i mean?
i'd definitely use this edit. c :
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Hyoka
Gaming Molcars
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Join date : 2010-06-18
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Black Gold Saw >.< Tue Jun 12, 2012 7:07 am | |
| - dmalone wrote:
- Fixed
no it's not fixed yet You need a better outline between her breasts or else it looks like monoboob effect which is badd edit: for example of how to accomplish this, reference this picture: - Spoiler:
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dmalone
Newbie
Posts : 21
Join date : 2012-05-24
Age : 27
Location : Indonesia
| | Subject: Re: Black Gold Saw >.< Tue Jun 12, 2012 10:13 pm | |
| - Hyoka wrote:
- dmalone wrote:
- Fixed
no it's not fixed yet
You need a better outline between her breasts or else it looks like monoboob effect which is badd
edit: for example of how to accomplish this, reference this picture:
- Spoiler:
Thanks 4 pointing that out Working on it | |
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Suguri
God Poster
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Join date : 2011-01-07
Age : 25
Location : Japan
| | Subject: Re: Black Gold Saw >.< Tue Jun 12, 2012 11:22 pm | |
| Not that this isn't a subject I know much about, but doesn't she have like a flame-type thing coming off one of her eyes?
You could polyedit one of the mechanical parts on the side of her head to make that and slide it slightly behind the eye, then remove the other one completely for the sake of symmetry. | |
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dmalone
Newbie
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Join date : 2012-05-24
Age : 27
Location : Indonesia
| | Subject: Re: Black Gold Saw >.< Thu Jun 14, 2012 12:13 pm | |
| Chest fixed XD - Spoiler:
For the eye part, I've tried to make the flame but i failed | |
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