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REIRA Newbie
Posts : 42 Join date : 2011-03-22
| Subject: My CB arts Tue Mar 22, 2011 5:22 am | |
| Zero Saber Girl >> referenced the pose out of the internet ; > ; My lovely Shino ; w ; *Failed I skinned them like that (Thats why they look different ! ) | |
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Kosuk Newbie
Posts : 39 Join date : 2011-01-18 Age : 33 Location : Sweden
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Tue Mar 22, 2011 9:30 am | |
| cool work! even tho i think the 1st pic is a lil weird in the anatomy. im sorry i am not that good on english x D
but it has something to to where her legs starts hope someone else can point it out for ya! : o | |
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Wolf Hikari Shiromo Get Launched Off
Posts : 2985 Join date : 2010-10-01 Age : 31 Location : The Twin Moon
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Tue Mar 22, 2011 10:49 am | |
| Welcome to the art section, I was hoping you would post your introduction first. Anyway, nice artwork you got there. What software did you use? Is it SAI or other paint software? Good Job on making that anyway! d^w^d The colors are cool! - Kosuk wrote:
- cool work!
even tho i think the 1st pic is a lil weird in the anatomy. im sorry i am not that good on english x D
but it has something to to where her legs starts hope someone else can point it out for ya! : o Yep, the lag of zsg is somehow fail, the pose of her body, arms and head is okay already. Anyway the right leg seems too long and yet her armor at the right leg seems to be slipped off. The left one is too short, the armor or that left leg seems attached from her kneel and both of the rotation was too much. Turn it back a little will be okay. (Note: My English was not too god either, but I hope you understand what I mean.) | |
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Nisa God Poster
Posts : 7152 Join date : 2010-12-29 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Tue Mar 22, 2011 11:23 am | |
| Your avatar....Is suspicious. | |
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ziix Burger Molcar
Posts : 3460 Join date : 2011-01-30 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Tue Mar 22, 2011 11:31 am | |
| - Nisa wrote:
- Your avatar....Is suspicious.
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Kosuk Newbie
Posts : 39 Join date : 2011-01-18 Age : 33 Location : Sweden
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Tue Mar 22, 2011 12:06 pm | |
| - Nisa wrote:
- Your avatar....Is suspicious.
I think it comes from a hentai manga named "newmanoid CAM" : o | |
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Wolf Hikari Shiromo Get Launched Off
Posts : 2985 Join date : 2010-10-01 Age : 31 Location : The Twin Moon
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Tue Mar 22, 2011 12:14 pm | |
| - Kosuk wrote:
- Nisa wrote:
- Your avatar....Is suspicious.
I think it comes from a hentai manga named "newmanoid CAM" : o Better to not speak about it. | |
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SkyPanic Adept Poster
Posts : 775 Join date : 2011-02-09
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Tue Mar 22, 2011 12:26 pm | |
| you re drawing shino or Rin ? that hair like Rin more than Shino and about ZSG, please check her legs ... | |
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REIRA Newbie
Posts : 42 Join date : 2011-03-22
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Tue Mar 22, 2011 4:29 pm | |
| Never new it came from that Manga ;_____;llll Just found a random image and thought to use it (for now). I should try to just replace it for something more kid-friendly? [ My English isn't the best too ] And yes I was going for the hair to be more Rin-like. I'm a Vocaloid fan myself! I have to take a good look on the ZSG picture, I new it will turn out a failure since I'm still a beginner with drawing [ It was an old picture founded in my folder :O! ]. I just recently drew this picture >> Any help with the autonomy problems? I use SAI and Sketch Book Pro, sometimes I use CS5 [ for the BG's ] | |
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Death-Hallow Regular Poster
Posts : 102 Join date : 2011-01-10 Age : 28 Location : Look Behind You...
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Tue Mar 22, 2011 11:15 pm | |
| Yo, Reira! You're finally on the forums! YAYZ~ ;A; *cries tears of joy*
Lol, just kidding, but seriously, I'm glad to see ya on the forums! Anyways, awesome art! : D And your little neko girl picture is turning out absolutely adorable! I don't see any anatomy problems with it, btw, but, then again, I'm not good at anatomy. But, those little bumps on the arm next to the sleeve is bothering me and it doesn't look natural. | |
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REIRA Newbie
Posts : 42 Join date : 2011-03-22
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Wed Mar 23, 2011 12:18 am | |
| - Death-Hallow wrote:
- Yo, Reira! You're finally on the forums! YAYZ~ ;A; *cries tears of joy*
Lol, just kidding, but seriously, I'm glad to see ya on the forums! Anyways, awesome art! : D And your little neko girl picture is turning out absolutely adorable! I don't see any anatomy problems with it, btw, but, then again, I'm not good at anatomy. But, those little bumps on the arm next to the sleeve is bothering me and it doesn't look natural. "But, those little bumps on the arm next to the sleeve is bothering me and it doesn't look natural." She is wearing gloves. Once its colored I hope it doesn't bother you. | |
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MightyPeanut Regular Poster
Posts : 289 Join date : 2010-07-03 Age : 32 Location : Kiwi land
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Wed Mar 23, 2011 3:49 am | |
| For the ZSG, The top half is fine but as others have said, the legs need some work, especially (her) right one. The lower half of her right leg, the shin and calf, has bulges in a lot of places instead of being a flowing line. The right robotic "shoe" also starts at her ankle whereas the "shoe" on her left leg starts below the knee.
As for the shoes themselves, too much of one side is showing. This is a problem because the shoe is almost a side profile while the rest of her body is at a 3/4 profile. To fix this, the visible corner should be more centered.
As for the cat girl, HNGHHHHHH! I see no problems.
That's a cute collar But i can imagine it going evil and strangling her I have a weird imagination | |
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Wolf Hikari Shiromo Get Launched Off
Posts : 2985 Join date : 2010-10-01 Age : 31 Location : The Twin Moon
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Wed Mar 23, 2011 5:30 am | |
| - REIRA wrote:
- Never new it came from that Manga ;_____;llll Just found a random image and thought to use it (for now).
I should try to just replace it for something more kid-friendly? [ My English isn't the best too ]
And yes I was going for the hair to be more Rin-like. I'm a Vocaloid fan myself! I have to take a good look on the ZSG picture, I new it will turn out a failure since I'm still a beginner with drawing [ It was an old picture founded in my folder :O! ].
I just recently drew this picture >> - Spoiler:
Any help with the autonomy problems?
I use SAI and Sketch Book Pro, sometimes I use CS5 [ for the BG's ] That one is good to be seen, did you use some mirror system? Both side almost look alike. O_O Good job on your sketch anyway! ^w^ | |
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Death-Hallow Regular Poster
Posts : 102 Join date : 2011-01-10 Age : 28 Location : Look Behind You...
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Wed Mar 23, 2011 10:49 pm | |
| - REIRA wrote:
- Death-Hallow wrote:
- Yo, Reira! You're finally on the forums! YAYZ~ ;A; *cries tears of joy*
Lol, just kidding, but seriously, I'm glad to see ya on the forums! Anyways, awesome art! : D And your little neko girl picture is turning out absolutely adorable! I don't see any anatomy problems with it, btw, but, then again, I'm not good at anatomy. But, those little bumps on the arm next to the sleeve is bothering me and it doesn't look natural.
"But, those little bumps on the arm next to the sleeve is bothering me and it doesn't look natural." She is wearing gloves. Once its colored I hope it doesn't bother you. Oh, those are gloves? Oh, then that's okay. It just looks like it shouldn't be there because the sleeve is right there, and then the bumps are right there under it, so, yea. But, that's okay. You make me sound picky, though, the way you answered me. >.> | |
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REIRA Newbie
Posts : 42 Join date : 2011-03-22
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Wed Mar 23, 2011 11:18 pm | |
| - Death-Hallow wrote:
- REIRA wrote:
- Death-Hallow wrote:
- Yo, Reira! You're finally on the forums! YAYZ~ ;A; *cries tears of joy*
Lol, just kidding, but seriously, I'm glad to see ya on the forums! Anyways, awesome art! : D And your little neko girl picture is turning out absolutely adorable! I don't see any anatomy problems with it, btw, but, then again, I'm not good at anatomy. But, those little bumps on the arm next to the sleeve is bothering me and it doesn't look natural.
"But, those little bumps on the arm next to the sleeve is bothering me and it doesn't look natural." She is wearing gloves. Once its colored I hope it doesn't bother you. Oh, those are gloves? Oh, then that's okay. It just looks like it shouldn't be there because the sleeve is right there, and then the bumps are right there under it, so, yea. But, that's okay. You make me sound picky, though, the way you answered me. >.> lawl | |
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REIRA Newbie
Posts : 42 Join date : 2011-03-22
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Wed Mar 23, 2011 11:19 pm | |
| - Wolf Hikari wrote:
- REIRA wrote:
- Never new it came from that Manga ;_____;llll Just found a random image and thought to use it (for now).
I should try to just replace it for something more kid-friendly? [ My English isn't the best too ]
And yes I was going for the hair to be more Rin-like. I'm a Vocaloid fan myself! I have to take a good look on the ZSG picture, I new it will turn out a failure since I'm still a beginner with drawing [ It was an old picture founded in my folder :O! ].
I just recently drew this picture >> - Spoiler:
Any help with the autonomy problems?
I use SAI and Sketch Book Pro, sometimes I use CS5 [ for the BG's ] That one is good to be seen, did you use some mirror system? Both side almost look alike. O_O Good job on your sketch anyway! ^w^ Used mirror system ;w; Thank you! | |
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Wolf Hikari Shiromo Get Launched Off
Posts : 2985 Join date : 2010-10-01 Age : 31 Location : The Twin Moon
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Thu Mar 24, 2011 12:11 pm | |
| I saw it now, I thought you wasn't. Still a good job anyway. ^w^ Keep up on the good work! | |
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Death-Hallow Regular Poster
Posts : 102 Join date : 2011-01-10 Age : 28 Location : Look Behind You...
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Thu Mar 24, 2011 4:33 pm | |
| You used a mirror system? I see things that are different on each side, though. Oh, well~ Doesn't matter~ xD | |
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REIRA Newbie
Posts : 42 Join date : 2011-03-22
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Thu Mar 24, 2011 11:49 pm | |
| - Death-Hallow wrote:
- You used a mirror system? I see things that are different on each side, though.
Oh, well~ Doesn't matter~ xD Just a couple edits | |
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Yokura Ace Poster
Posts : 1237 Join date : 2010-12-31
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Thu Apr 07, 2011 2:52 am | |
| REIRA. Whar's the colored version >': Been looking forward to the colored version of the cute kitty girl <3
*pokes REIRA* >': /sadface | |
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REIRA Newbie
Posts : 42 Join date : 2011-03-22
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Sat Apr 09, 2011 7:17 pm | |
| - Yokura wrote:
- REIRA. Whar's the colored version >': Been looking forward to the colored version of the cute kitty girl <3
*pokes REIRA* >': /sadface I'll finish it :3 *I was lazy ;>;* I wanted to draw Medi Aide badly I added a Maid headband : D! I can already tell about the atonomy problems in the left hand :/ | |
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MightyPeanut Regular Poster
Posts : 289 Join date : 2010-07-03 Age : 32 Location : Kiwi land
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Sun Apr 10, 2011 2:41 am | |
| I think the body and eyes are really good, but there's something up with the face shape.
The part where the vertical line changes direction (to form the jawline and chin) is coming too late which makes her look really chubby. It usually starts curving towards the chin somewhere between the nose and mouth level. Currently, it curves in under the mouth level.
Take a look at Meiling in your signature for a reference | |
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RawGreen Newbie
Posts : 28 Join date : 2010-06-15 Age : 32 Location : Wisconsin
| Subject: Re: My CB arts Thu Jun 02, 2011 1:22 pm | |
| the anatomy problems with the first picture are simple, her right arm needs a little bit of curve at her crease. And as for the crotch, you're a guy aren't you? So you would know or think it, but the crotch of a woman is located higher around the hips. NOT where you put it. If you REALLY don't understand, I can draw an example. | |
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