Art of China

Also known as Kuhi on the Official forums. Thanks to whoever linked me here, and sorry if I spam this place with constant updates.

http://www.cosmicbreak.com/commu/img.php?filename=tc_25565_1_1295387632.png&m=pc

This was my last update, might as well not attach a file since it's already uploaded. Please keep all comments to criticising my work and being helpful.

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Also known as Kuhi on the Official forums. Thanks to whoever linked me here, and sorry if I spam this place with constant updates.

http://www.cosmicbreak.com/commu/img.php?filename=tc_25565_1_1295387632.png&m=pc

This was my last update, might as well not attach a file since it's already uploaded. Please keep all comments to criticising my work and being helpful.

Welcome Kuhi. It's Nyan0079. Good to see you took my advice :3

We fellow artists here will make sure you don't get ripped off by the trolls and thieves from that contest.

And enjoy your stay in the community.

Ah, thanks Rei~

Here's an update, I changed some lines and chose some colors to see what worked. I'm glad I did because now I notice a lot of mistakes.

The sketch is closer to what I want, now to work on her accessory stuff like her hairpiece and back part. Anybody notice any mistakes?

Looks good so far. Just do as much as you can and we'll see where changes can be applied.

Once I finish the headpiece I'll move to the final sketch/lineart/whatever you call it. After that is coloring. Please point anything you notice that looks strange or bad.

Nice! Your drawing is looking great so far!

The only mistake I see is the fingers, so far. The fingers are kinda chunky and rounded. Females fingers are slender and a bit pointed, not too much point, though. But, don't let my criticism get in your way because it looks amazing!