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BBBQ4 Newbie
Posts : 43 Join date : 2011-01-04 Age : 28 Location : NARNIA
| Subject: More fan art you say... Sat Jan 15, 2011 8:34 pm | |
| yeah that's right http://bbbq4.deviantart.com/art/Lily-rain-colour-ver-193578181 yeah i joined the fanart contest with this. I don't know if I win any awards with this but it's still fan art. Give me your opinion will you... | |
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Yokura Ace Poster
Posts : 1237 Join date : 2010-12-31
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Sat Jan 15, 2011 8:46 pm | |
| I think you've done a pretty good job O: It looks a little flat, but I think that's because of the style of shading.
Question! Did you purposely leave Lily's undergarment-thingy not colored in? | |
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BBBQ4 Newbie
Posts : 43 Join date : 2011-01-04 Age : 28 Location : NARNIA
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Sat Jan 15, 2011 8:57 pm | |
| - Yokura wrote:
- I think you've done a pretty good job O: It looks a little flat, but I think that's because of the style of shading.
Question! Did you purposely leave Lily's undergarment-thingy not colored in? Oh yeah... This is my second drawing on a com. so its not a surprise it turned out funny. and an answer to your question I believe its not supposed to be colored. but it does lack some detail yes. oh well but it does work somehow | |
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halcyon Regular Poster
Posts : 170 Join date : 2011-01-14 Age : 33 Location : New Zealand
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Sun Jan 16, 2011 4:04 am | |
| If I may point out, the shoulders are too low...
And I would love to have that gun ingame. I kinda dont like how the guns in CB are too oversized for the bots... | |
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MightyPeanut Regular Poster
Posts : 289 Join date : 2010-07-03 Age : 32 Location : Kiwi land
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Sun Jan 16, 2011 4:13 am | |
| Yes her shoulders are low, her neck line does not meet up with the shoulder line. Also, the body should ideally be an "hourglass" shape. Meaning that from her chest, it gets slimmer around the belly area before widening again at her hips. At the moment, it gets wider and wider as it goes down without the slimming part. Good job on the gun and head | |
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BBBQ4 Newbie
Posts : 43 Join date : 2011-01-04 Age : 28 Location : NARNIA
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Sun Jan 16, 2011 5:50 am | |
| - MightyPeanut wrote:
- Yes her shoulders are low, her neck line does not meet up with the shoulder line. Also, the body should ideally be an "hourglass" shape. Meaning that from her chest, it gets slimmer around the belly area before widening again at her hips. At the moment, it gets wider and wider as it goes down without the slimming part. Good job on the gun and head
Then again this is my second drawing on the flayputer and also my first time drawing lily. but i see you points. But about the shoulders... in the game you can actually take them off so that kinda means shes a robot. so no wonder it doesn't match with the other body . or maybe not. but thanks for the feedback ill try drawing lily again | |
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BBBQ4 Newbie
Posts : 43 Join date : 2011-01-04 Age : 28 Location : NARNIA
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Sun Jan 16, 2011 7:26 am | |
| http://bbbq4.deviantart.com/art/MILK-193660883
well how about this ?
any improvements ?
no? | |
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MightyPeanut Regular Poster
Posts : 289 Join date : 2010-07-03 Age : 32 Location : Kiwi land
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:06 am | |
| Yes, it's improving. If you want to develop it more, the arms could be a little slimmer, especially at the wrist before her hand. The hourglass shape is definitely better and could be more emphasized if you wanted.
I could put some notes on the picture if you don't mind. | |
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BBBQ4 Newbie
Posts : 43 Join date : 2011-01-04 Age : 28 Location : NARNIA
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:10 am | |
| - MightyPeanut wrote:
- Yes, it's improving.
If you want to develop it more, the arms could be a little slimmer, especially at the wrist before her hand. The hourglass shape is definitely better and could be more emphasized if you wanted.
I could put some notes on the picture if you don't mind. sure Its good to learn these things cause I've only done normal manga style drawings before | |
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MightyPeanut Regular Poster
Posts : 289 Join date : 2010-07-03 Age : 32 Location : Kiwi land
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:55 am | |
| - Spoiler:
There ya go. And this is the boob guide which i found from somewhere - Spoiler:
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Wolf Hikari Shiromo Get Launched Off
Posts : 2985 Join date : 2010-10-01 Age : 31 Location : The Twin Moon
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DreamyCrowdy Regular Poster
Posts : 130 Join date : 2010-09-26
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Sun Jan 16, 2011 12:25 pm | |
| I like the gun more replace milk with guns | |
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BBBQ4 Newbie
Posts : 43 Join date : 2011-01-04 Age : 28 Location : NARNIA
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Sun Jan 16, 2011 12:34 pm | |
| - DreamyCrowdy wrote:
- I like the gun more
replace milk with guns NEHVUR I like the milk idea more but I can prolly make a one with dual wield guns. SO INFO. I'm gettin a little bit busy with school and stuff so I I have limited time to draw but I try to update and make more drawings as fast as i can.... | |
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Nvr_GvUP Newbie
Posts : 44 Join date : 2010-12-27 Age : 25 Location : QatIndo
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Mon Jan 17, 2011 7:20 am | |
| A bit of off-topic...
Is the skin competition the fanart competition u guys are talking about?
Or is it another thing? ;/ | |
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DreamyCrowdy Regular Poster
Posts : 130 Join date : 2010-09-26
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:12 am | |
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Nvr_GvUP Newbie
Posts : 44 Join date : 2010-12-27 Age : 25 Location : QatIndo
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Mon Jan 17, 2011 9:10 am | |
| So, does that mean it's the same thing?
I admit my noobness | |
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DreamyCrowdy Regular Poster
Posts : 130 Join date : 2010-09-26
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Mon Jan 17, 2011 9:38 am | |
| 1 is skinning contest from the forum the other is artwork/drawing contest from official site
no they're not | |
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Nvr_GvUP Newbie
Posts : 44 Join date : 2010-12-27 Age : 25 Location : QatIndo
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Mon Jan 17, 2011 12:14 pm | |
| Aytee, thanks alot | |
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BBBQ4 Newbie
Posts : 43 Join date : 2011-01-04 Age : 28 Location : NARNIA
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Thu Jan 20, 2011 1:32 pm | |
| http://bbbq4.deviantart.com/#/d37mjbl Phew finally done! Well 'aint this better or what I just like to keep it simple and clean. | |
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Tiffany Newcomer
Posts : 15 Join date : 2011-01-20 Age : 36
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Thu Jan 20, 2011 1:45 pm | |
| lol I'm glad you kept trying, I fav'd all three on DA (so you'll see lil "Mina-22 has fav'd blahblah) XD I like how it turned out :3 it's very cute. and yes it's alot better compared to your older one(s) :3 good job | |
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BBBQ4 Newbie
Posts : 43 Join date : 2011-01-04 Age : 28 Location : NARNIA
| Subject: Re: More fan art you say... Thu Jan 20, 2011 1:52 pm | |
| - Tiffany wrote:
- lol I'm glad you kept trying, I fav'd all three on DA (so you'll see lil "Mina-22 has fav'd blahblah) XD
I like how it turned out :3 it's very cute. and yes it's alot better compared to your older one(s) :3 good job Yeah whats up with that I dont know why I keep trying but that 2.000 rt would be nice. but i'ts also been a major pain in the a$$ to draw that much. ( yeah like these two and bucha other stuff like doujin covers. ) But I still like the results. | |
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