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PostSubject: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptySat Jan 15, 2011 8:34 pm

bounce yeah that's right

http://bbbq4.deviantart.com/art/Lily-rain-colour-ver-193578181

yeah i joined the fanart contest with this.
I don't know if I win any awards with this but it's still fan art.

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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptySat Jan 15, 2011 8:46 pm

I think you've done a pretty good job O: It looks a little flat, but I think that's because of the style of shading.

Question! Did you purposely leave Lily's undergarment-thingy not colored in?
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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptySat Jan 15, 2011 8:57 pm

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I think you've done a pretty good job O: It looks a little flat, but I think that's because of the style of shading.

Question! Did you purposely leave Lily's undergarment-thingy not colored in?


Oh yeah... This is my second drawing on a com. so its not a surprise it turned out funny.

and an answer to your question I believe its not supposed to be colored. but it does lack some detail yes.

oh well but it does work somehow
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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 4:04 am

If I may point out, the shoulders are too low...

And I would love to have that gun ingame. I kinda dont like how the guns in CB are too oversized for the bots...
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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 4:13 am

Yes her shoulders are low, her neck line does not meet up with the shoulder line. Also, the body should ideally be an "hourglass" shape. Meaning that from her chest, it gets slimmer around the belly area before widening again at her hips. At the moment, it gets wider and wider as it goes down without the slimming part. Good job on the gun and head
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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 5:50 am

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Yes her shoulders are low, her neck line does not meet up with the shoulder line. Also, the body should ideally be an "hourglass" shape. Meaning that from her chest, it gets slimmer around the belly area before widening again at her hips. At the moment, it gets wider and wider as it goes down without the slimming part. Good job on the gun and head

Then again this is my second drawing on the flayputer and also my first time drawing lily.
but i see you points. But about the shoulders... in the game you can actually take them off so that kinda means shes a robot. so no wonder it doesn't match with the other body rabbit . or maybe not. Neutral

but thanks for the feedback ill try drawing lily again

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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 7:26 am

http://bbbq4.deviantart.com/art/MILK-193660883

well how about this ?

any improvements ?

no?
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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 8:06 am

Yes, it's improving.
If you want to develop it more, the arms could be a little slimmer, especially at the wrist before her hand. The hourglass shape is definitely better and could be more emphasized if you wanted.

I could put some notes on the picture if you don't mind.
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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 8:10 am

MightyPeanut wrote:
Yes, it's improving.
If you want to develop it more, the arms could be a little slimmer, especially at the wrist before her hand. The hourglass shape is definitely better and could be more emphasized if you wanted.

I could put some notes on the picture if you don't mind.

sure tongue Its good to learn these things cause I've only done normal manga style drawings before
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Spoiler:

There ya go. And this is the boob guide which i found from somewhere
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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 10:58 am

IDK what to say, but I suppose I agree with MightyPeanut. He's also know how to help you out.
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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 12:25 pm

I like the gun more
replace milk with guns
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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 12:34 pm

DreamyCrowdy wrote:
I like the gun more
replace milk with guns

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I like the milk idea more but I can prolly make a one with dual wield guns.

SO INFO. I'm gettin a little bit busy with school and stuff so I I have limited time to draw
but I try to update and make more drawings as fast as i can....
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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptyMon Jan 17, 2011 7:20 am

A bit of off-topic...

Is the skin competition the fanart competition u guys are talking about?

Or is it another thing? ;/
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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptyMon Jan 17, 2011 9:10 am

So, does that mean it's the same thing?

I admit my noobness
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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptyMon Jan 17, 2011 9:38 am

1 is skinning contest from the forum
the other is artwork/drawing contest from official site

no they're not
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Aytee, thanks alot Smile
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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptyThu Jan 20, 2011 1:32 pm

http://bbbq4.deviantart.com/#/d37mjbl

Phew finally done! drunken

Well 'aint this better or what Very Happy

I just like to keep it simple and clean.
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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptyThu Jan 20, 2011 1:45 pm

lol I'm glad you kept trying, I fav'd all three on DA Razz (so you'll see lil "Mina-22 has fav'd blahblah) XD

I like how it turned out :3 it's very cute. and yes it's alot better compared to your older one(s) :3 good job
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PostSubject: Re: More fan art you say...   More fan art you say... EmptyThu Jan 20, 2011 1:52 pm

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lol I'm glad you kept trying, I fav'd all three on DA Razz (so you'll see lil "Mina-22 has fav'd blahblah) XD

I like how it turned out :3 it's very cute. and yes it's alot better compared to your older one(s) :3 good job

Yeah whats up with that I dont know why I keep trying but that 2.000 rt would be nice.

but i'ts also been a major pain in the a$$ to draw that much. ( yeah like these two and bucha other stuff like doujin covers. )
But I still like the results. Sleep
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