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PostSubject: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptySat Jan 07, 2017 12:11 pm

Here is the place where I show you guys what I've been doing for everyday. I thought it will be fun to recieve your critiques from here. And I would like to show my process so far right from the day I said I will be on hiatus (of manga). If you guys like and support it I will post my daily training like this.
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Day5 special self assignment: kimono with a newly created model.
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptySat Jan 07, 2017 12:19 pm

http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=10216435 yes pie has a pixiv. Play with pei.
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptySat Jan 07, 2017 12:46 pm

"I'm Bob."

I loled XD
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptySun Jan 08, 2017 11:52 am

@Kuzuha wrote:
"I'm Bob."

I loled XD

Bob za rokku
Day 6: nothing special, i picked random reference then tried to percieve the colour and slapped them in. I did with only colour capturing, no scaling or sort of. I also do time limit while doing it the most precise as possible. Really fun with this kind of exercise.
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reference:
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptySun Jan 08, 2017 11:59 am

I should learn how to draw BGs too...
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptySun Jan 08, 2017 12:05 pm

I suggest you learn the very basic principles of design. In that the composition is really really important.
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptySun Jan 08, 2017 12:10 pm

@chibigunsou wrote:
I suggest you learn the very basic principles of design. In that the composition is really really important.

and what are these principles?
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptySun Jan 08, 2017 12:17 pm

It is another term for composition basics, consist of :scale and propotion, repetition, emphasis, balance, movement, and unity.
A good drawing isnt just about drawing technique if the drawing...has no intention of the artist atleast. Or just too confusing to see. Though the best option is to mix in between the technique and composition.
There still anatomy and perspective. Trust me it is a pain in the ass subject, the only way is to study it properly from reliable tutorial books.
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptySun Jan 08, 2017 2:09 pm

I still suck at drawing backgrounds.
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptyMon Jan 09, 2017 11:37 am

Day 7: in this I will also demostrate the way how artists communicate to each other, the critique Hamburger
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The one below has good composition, as you can see there is a flow of balance so it wont feel odd in some way. But as I tried to make the bunny further than the cactus by manipulating the colour, i also made a big fukt up move by make the rocks relatively close to the bunny- confusing . However, you can still feel the sense of movement (yes nothing is moving) towards the cactus which is what i wanted you guys to focus to.
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Liking or hating a drawing is not a good constructive critique if you want to be better everytime. But it will feel like a direct insult if the opinion is too harsh. So, what the drawing has achieved + what it hasnt and need recommendation + what the drawing has achieved. Of couse you can do it to yourself by take a look back what you did to your drawing.

EDIT: refined with more heat.
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you guys can try the critique hamburger on this one! Critiques are welcome (say you liek it is also welcome lol)


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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptyMon Jan 09, 2017 11:39 am

I also managed to do a quick colour capturing exercise
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptyTue Jan 10, 2017 11:41 am


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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptyTue Jan 10, 2017 12:04 pm

Love it! Is that Shigure?
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptyTue Jan 10, 2017 12:06 pm

no rain so she is mad
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptyTue Jan 10, 2017 12:25 pm

@chibigunsou wrote:
no rain so she is mad

While smiling?
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptyTue Jan 10, 2017 12:28 pm

mildly mad
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptyWed Jan 11, 2017 12:27 pm

Day 9
Small fun perspective exercise. All i had to do was drawing the wobby rectangles in logical way! If anyone wants to do this exercise download the JPG from this link https://static1.squarespace.com/static/50a3c190e4b0d12fc9231429/t/511960a5e4b06e250bbf72bf/1360617637329/ctrlPaint_ws_perspective101.jpg
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptyWed Jan 11, 2017 3:33 pm

I think I better try those perspective stuff. Also, some mangakas hire assistants who are mostly in the technical courses and such.
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptyThu Jan 12, 2017 12:08 pm

Day 10:
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptyThu Jan 12, 2017 4:36 pm

Awesome pics. Great size. Look thick. Solid. Tight. Keep us all posted on your continued progress with any new progress pics or vid clips. Show us what you got man. Wanna see how freakin' huge, solid, thick and tight you can get. Thanks for the motivation.
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptyThu Jan 12, 2017 8:51 pm

Nice one man! Looking forward to your progress.
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptyFri Jan 13, 2017 11:48 am

Day 11: more composition thing
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thenks for the comments
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptySat Jan 14, 2017 10:35 am

day12: pc got rekt. Bitdefender deleted cmd file.Pie's Determinayshon 14844010
using derp phone to sadly capture this scene
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PostSubject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon   Pie's Determinayshon EmptySat Jan 14, 2017 11:09 am

My pc got rekt yesterday too due to a power shutdown...

Life sucks!
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