Hey, just read the story! I liked the introduction very well, since you used simple words but still described things in detail (although I admit I may have accidentally skimmed through some paragraphs), like how the school uniform looked like and whatnot, while still keeping the story and flashbacks in check. Personally, I'm rooting for Rouge because no one else seemed intresting enough in such a sotry where people fight to the death because they spend time training instead of studying. It's actually pretty interesting due to the path and all. I wouldn't mind if this was the story for some RPG fighting game or something. Might be a good edutainment thing.
Feedback? I'm not sure. There's nothing really wrong with it or anything as far as I've read. Everything seems to be okay.
Enjoyed reading it? Sure I did!
Oh, and one more thing... since this isn't CB-related, you should post it somewhere else like The Lounge or something next time, I think.
Like all girls, they go through stress, friendships, and drama, but the experience they have together is once in a lifetime! Please give me any feedback you have, as it really helps, and I hope you enjoy reading 